The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO²) emissions per person in the United Kingdom , Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO²) emissions per person in the United Kingdom , Sweden, Italy, and Portugal  between 1967 and 2007
The graph portrays the mean amount of carbon dioxide emitted
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per person in the four countries of the
UK
,
Sweden
, Italy and Portugal between the years of 1967 and 2007.
Overall
, the countries Italy and Portugal show a uniform increase in carbon dioxide emissions
while
Sweden
experiences a downward trend. Meanwhile, the
UK
has remained steady throughout the years with a slight downfall in the end.
Firstly
, the
UK
emits about 11 metric
tonnes
in 1967 with Portugal at 1 metric
tonnes
, Italy at approximately 4 metric
tonnes
and
Sweden
at 9 metric
tonnes
.
Sweden
reached its peak of 11
tonnes
in 1977 and
then
suddenly dropped to 7
tonnes
in 1987. Portugal and Italy
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some fluctuations where Italy
surpasses
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Sweden
in 1987 and remained steady at 8
tonnes
till 2007.
Sweden
and Portugal settled at 6
tonnes
and
Uk
uniformly decreased to around 9
tonnes
in 2007.
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  • carbon dioxide emissions
  • average emissions per person
  • trends
  • reduction
  • increase
  • comparison
  • contrast
  • pivotal years
  • industrial growth
  • policy changes
  • economic changes
  • energy sources
  • technology advancements
  • environmental policies
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