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The pie graph below shows how electricity is produced in Ireland and the table shows the primary reasons for using electricity in the same country.

The pie graph below shows how electricity is produced in Ireland and the table shows the primary reasons for using electricity in the same country.
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The graph illustrates the proportions of
power
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sources
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 which are utilized in the production of electricity in Ireland.
Overall
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, the Major two
power
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sources
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 are Coal and gas.
Moreover
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, the other
sources
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 of
energy
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 are wind and solar which produce the exact same amount of electric
power
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. The four
sources
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 of
energy
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 that are used to produce electricity are Coal, Gas, Wind and Solar.
Therefore
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 the source of
energy
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 responsible for 45% of the
Power
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 generation is Coal.
Secondly
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, gas is used at about 35%
Furthermore
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, the percentage of electric
energy
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 generated by Wind is 10%.
Similarly
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, Solar is
also
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 responsible for 10% of the total electric
power
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 production in Ireland.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words power, sources, energy with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Electricity grid
  • Renewable energy
  • Environmental impact
  • Economy
  • Energy mix
  • Carbon emissions
  • Industrial consumption
  • Residential use
  • Government policy
  • Seasonal variations
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