The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017.
the graph demonstrates the
number
of
tourists
visiting a Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017.
Overall
, there was a significant increase in the
number
of
tourists
over the period, particularly from 2016. In 2010, the
number
of visitors was approximately 0.75, but it steadily rose to reach a peak of 3 in 2017. between 2010 and 2016, the growth was gradual, with the
number
of
tourists
increasing to around 2.45. the highest
number
of
tourists
3
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was 3
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in 2017,
while
in 2010 was 0.75
number
of
tourists
, and it was the lowest level. from 2011 to 2016
numbers
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number
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of
tourists
were
Correct subject-verb agreement
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0.9, 1.1, 1.25, 1.6,
1.9
Correct word choice
and 1.9
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, which shows that
increase
Correct article usage
the increase
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did not stop
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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