The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017.
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the graph demonstrates the
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of
tourists
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visiting a Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017.
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, there was a significant increase in the
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of
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over the period, particularly from 2016. In 2010, the
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of visitors was approximately 0.75, but it steadily rose to reach a peak of 3 in 2017. between 2010 and 2016, the growth was gradual, with the
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of
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increasing to around 2.45. the highest
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of
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3
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in 2017,
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in 2010 was 0.75
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of
tourists
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, and it was the lowest level. from 2011 to 2016
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of
tourists
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0.9, 1.1, 1.25, 1.6,
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and 1.9
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, which shows that
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the increase
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did not stop
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, tourists with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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