The pie graph below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities ni which girls participate.
The
presented
pie graphs below Verb problem
apply
gives
the Correct subject-verb agreement
give
result
of a survey of children's Fix the agreement mistake
results
activities
. The first graph introduces the cultural and leisure activities
that males participate in. Whereas the
second graph presents Correct word choice
The
the
information about the Correct article usage
apply
activities
in which the females participate.
Overall
In boys
Cultural and leisure Change noun form
boy's
boys'
activities
the most popular Add a comma
activities,
one
is Computer games with just around the
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one
third but for Correct pronoun usage
apply
females
the most popular Add a comma
females,
activities
is dancing. In the given pie chart there is Fix the agreement mistake
activity
a
same number of people Correct article usage
the
which
choose the Correct pronoun usage
who
listening
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listen
music
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to music
in
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at
cultural
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a cultural
festival
in both groups. Reading was not popular in Fix the agreement mistake
festivals
boy's
group, only two Correct article usage
the boy's
percent
but Change the spelling
per cent
twenty
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twenty-one
one
percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
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the girls
girls
group Change noun form
girls'
girl's
was
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were
interesred
in reading more than Correct your spelling
interested
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the boy's
boy's
.
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boys
Furthermore
a
roughly Correct article usage
apply
one quarter
of boys Add a hyphen
one-quarter
are liked
to play basketball Wrong verb form
like
in
Change preposition
at
festival
. Taking Fix the agreement mistake
festivals
closing
look at the second chart fifteen Add an article
a closing
percent
of Female Change the spelling
per cent
children's
participate in Netball in cultural festival Unnecessary verb
children
activities
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 86%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words activities, one with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "presented" was used 2 times.
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