The diagram below shows how energy is produced from coal.

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First of all the coal is mined and

then

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carried along

conveyor

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the conveyor

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belt. After the oxygen is added to

coal

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the coal

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into

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furnace

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the furnace

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, the coal is burned.

As a result

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apply

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which

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apply

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raw syngas

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are

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produced. Next step of the process, CO2 , mercury and sulphur are removed.

Then

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purified syngas is used to drive a gas

turbine

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, where there are 2 options to make electricity. First of them, the

turbine

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in turn powers a generator. The second one the gas

turbine

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produces hot

exhust

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exhaust

gases. But

then

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these gases are

pipped

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piped

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to a heat recovery

steam

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generator, where it

is produced

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steam

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. Before electricity can be created,

steam

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must pass through

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steam

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a steam

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turbine

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and generator. In conclusion after all of these steps, we can make electricity from coal.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

129 words

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The diagram below shows how energy is produced from coal.

You recently booked a part-time course at a college. You now need to cancel your booking. Write a letter to the college administrator. In your letter, say which part-time course you booked explain why you need to cancel your booking ask about booking a different course

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