The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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pie chart illustrates where

dance

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courses are being held, and the bar chart gives information about the number of young people categorized in 2 divided age brackets, currently attending

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different types of

dance

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classes

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, including ballet, tap and modern in a particular town in Australia.

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, private studios are the most popular locations among youngsters.

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, individuals under 11 are mostly attracted to ballet

classes

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modern courses are more interesting for juveniles from 11 to 16 years old. Looking at the details, private studios

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about half of the locations of

dance

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classes

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, the most among all. The figure for

schools

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halls and community halls and others are 24% and 18%, respectively.

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only one-fifth of times

college based

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college-based

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studios are being used, marking it the least popular among all. Regarding types of

dance

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classes

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while

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ballet is the most common among participants under 11 with about 600 attendances, older ones from 11 to 16 years old prefer modern

dance

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classes

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with just over 500 participants. These

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group

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show almost similar interest when it comes to tap

dance

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courses.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words dance, classes with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

185 words

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The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people believe that children should be allowed to go out for outdoor activities. While others believe that children should stay at home most of the time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social issues as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same thing and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss bot these views and give your opinion.