The diagram shows how tea leaves are processed into five tea types. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows how tea leaves are processed into five tea types.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram represents the steps that are involved
while
processing
tea
leaves to obtain a certain type of type. The
digram
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diagram
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outlines the process
to make
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White
Tea
, Green
Tea
, Oolong
Tea
, Large
Leaf
Black
Tea
and Small
Leaf
Black
Tea
. The process of making
tea
begins with growing and plucking
tea
leaves, following specific steps before drying the material in the
oven
. The variation between each kind differs a little as steaming and
rolloing
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rolling
following
before
oven
drying would give Green
Tea
instead
of White
Tea
.
While
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Tea
involves the least effort and time as growing, plucking, wilting and
oven
drying
needs
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need
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to be done in order to obtain White
Tea
. Adding the rolling
phase
and slightly fermenting the
tea
before
oven
drying would result in Oolong
Tea
and steaming before the rolling
phase
without fermenting would give Green
Tea
.
Similarly
, the process for Small
Leaf
and Large
Leaf
Black
Tea
is almost
same
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the same
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. To obtain Small
Leaf
Black
Tea
the
tea
leaves need to go through rolling and full fermentation
whereas
for Large
Leaf
Black
Tea
the
tea
leaves need to
be processes
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through
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the curshing
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curshing
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crushing
phase
instead
of
rolling
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the rolling
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phase
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "instead, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, leaf, oven, phase with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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