Some people hold a belief that engaging in
voluntareering
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volunteering
activity
is an obligation with all Use synonyms
students
in Use synonyms
university
. In my opinion, I believe that voluntary Add an article
the university
a university
work
brings certain benefits to Use synonyms
students
and society but there exists some rationales that these activities should be optional.
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activity
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activities
a great deal of
advantages for Change the quantifier
a lot of
many
plenty of
students
. The first reason is that Use synonyms
students
can have rewarding Use synonyms
experience
owing to the meaningful things when they volunteer. Fix the agreement mistake
experiences
Furthermore
, the youths could improve their social responsibility and build up their CV. The candidates with Linking Words
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tend
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activeness
helfulness
for society. Correct your spelling
helpfulness
As a result
, Linking Words
students
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prospect
. Another reason is that volunteering Fix the agreement mistake
prospects
activity
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work
, Use synonyms
therefore
, it contributes to Linking Words
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the decrease
a decrease
of
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in
expense
. Thanks to the volunteers helping doing social Fix the agreement mistake
expenses
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activity
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activities
such
as cleaning streets or collecting Linking Words
garbages
, the government can save money for investing in other important needs.
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On the other hand
, there exists certain drawbacks that not all Linking Words
students
can do volunteering Use synonyms
work
obligationally. First of all, some Use synonyms
students
are not having enough physical health to participate in voluntary Use synonyms
activity
. Use synonyms
For instance
, the youths who have to suffer from heart Linking Words
problem
can not do burden activities or stay outside under the sun for a long time. Fix the agreement mistake
problems
Secondly
, if Linking Words
students
spend most of Use synonyms
time
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their time
on
volunteering, they Change preposition
apply
would
not have enough time for studying, one of the most important duties when they Wrong verb form
will
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in Change the spelling
enrol
university
. It could lead to pressure Add an article
the university
a university
for
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on
students
and they might be distracted from their Use synonyms
study
. Fix the agreement mistake
studies
Hence
, their study and academic results will Linking Words
be gone
down gradually. Wrong verb form
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Lastly
, forcing all Linking Words
students
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engaging
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go
against the natural meaning of volunteering. A must of doing voluntary Correct subject-verb agreement
goes
work
might reduce Use synonyms
value
of Add an article
the value
goodess
because Correct your spelling
goodness
goods
the
volunteering comes from Correct article usage
apply
heart
in genuine.
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the heart
while
I accept that participating in voluntary Linking Words
work
brings about Use synonyms
the
variety of benefits for both Correct article usage
a
students
and Use synonyms
local
community, I Correct article usage
the local
also
assume that it is impossible to Linking Words
impose
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allow
students
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volunteer
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