The charts below show the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart represents the annual
income
in
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of
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millions of
the
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apply
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households
in millions in the US for the years 2007, 2011 and 2015. In the year 2007, just about 25
million
households
earned less than $25,000 in
income
and almost 30
million
households
earned more than $100,000 in
income
. It is clear, during 2011 the country witnessed a decrease in
income
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the income
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of
households
and the
households
earning less grew in number and others reduced. Again, in 2015 the country recovered as the number of
households
earning more than $100,000 has grown from being below 30
million
households
to almost 35
million
households
. During the years 2007, 2011 and 2015, the number of houses earning about $50,000 - $74,999 and $75,000 - $99,999 remained relatively steady
whereas
other
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others
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have
fluctuate
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fluctuated
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significantly.
Overall
, the country had seen an
upwords
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upward
trend in
income
per house over the span of 8 years as most of the houses in the US in 2015
are
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were
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earning more than $100,000 per household.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words income, households, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • distribution
  • household income
  • economic fluctuations
  • income brackets
  • economic downturns
  • economic growth
  • global financial crisis
  • recovery
  • middle-income bracket
  • trends
  • proportion
  • stability
  • stagnation
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