The charts below show the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar graph illustrates the amount of

households

in the United

state

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by their annual wage in 2007, 2001 and 2015.

Overall

, It is noticeable that the

quntity

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quantity

households

75,000

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the 75,000

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-99,999

dollers

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dollars

group

accounted for the least at around 15

millions

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million

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in all years.

While

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apply

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The people who earn money more than 100,000

are

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stood

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the highest

households

except in 2011. Looking at the graph more closely, It is

noticable

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noticeable

that in 2011, the number of

households

in the two smallest income groups surpassed the highest income

group

compared to the both 50k-75k and 75k-10k groups

remaind

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remaining

stable at the two least

householdes

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households

householders

. It accounted for around 20

millions

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and 15

millions

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million

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respectibly

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respectively

. The

combined

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of these two

groups's

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groups'

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hoseholds

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household

number

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numbers

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simillar

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similar

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the amount of

househole

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households

in 100.000 and more income

group

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groups

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in 2015, recording 35

millions

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million

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Moreover

this

year, The

group

who make more than 100,000 dollars ranked back to the highest number of

household

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households

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Vocabulary: Replace the words households, group, millions with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

distribution
household income
economic fluctuations
income brackets
economic downturns
economic growth
global financial crisis
recovery
middle-income bracket
trends
proportion
stability
stagnation

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The charts below show the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen. What is your opinion about an ideal society? How can we create an ideal society?

The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment.

Marriages are bigger and more expansive nowadays than in the past. Do the advantages of this overweigh the disadvantages?

Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?