The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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people

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’s health

standard

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standards

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will

be decreasing

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in the future compared to today. In my opinion, I agree that

people

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’s health

standard

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standards

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will decrease within years

due to

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bad

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poor

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air

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and

water

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quality

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and expensive

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source

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of

nutrients

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.

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, an increasing number of deforestation to develop residential and industrial areas affects the

quality

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of

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and

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which play an essential role in

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activities.

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the main

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to produce

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oxygen and

protect

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protecting

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water

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nutrients

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continue

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to decrease, the quantity of houses and factories, which contribute to

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and

air

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pollution, will remain or even higher in the future.

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, the

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of

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will be poorer and difficult to find since it is already mixed with chemical substances.

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an

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instance,

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will be more reluctant to dangerous diseases

such

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as

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and cancer.

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currently there are more farmers who produce various

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of fruits and vegetables organically, without chemical substances, in order to provide nutritious food for

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, the price of these

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of meals

are

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quiet

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expensive for some

people

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.

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,

people

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who may not be able to afford them will keep buying the cheaper mass-produced vegetables, ignoring the

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that it can be unhealthy for their bodies.

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condition will lead to an increasing case of

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who

are

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lack

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nutrients

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because they can not afford a healthy

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of food. In conclusion,

people

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’s health standard is predicted to be lower in the future than it is now because two elements

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play an important role in

human’s

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life,

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, will be more polluted which may cause dangerous diseases.

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, the best

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of food may not be accessible

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everyone, causing more cases of

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who

are

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lack

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nutrients

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.