The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is believed that the average

of

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people

’s health

standard

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standards

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will

be decreasing

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decrease

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in the future compared to today. In my opinion, I agree that

people

’s health

standard

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standards

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will decrease within years

due to

bad

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poor

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air

and

water

quality

and expensive

source

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sources

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of

nutrients

.

Firstly

, an increasing number of deforestation to develop residential and industrial areas affects the

quality

of

air

and

water

which play an essential role in

human’s

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activities.

While

the main

source

to produce

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oxygen and

protect

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protecting

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water

nutrients

continue

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to decrease, the quantity of houses and factories, which contribute to

water

and

air

pollution, will remain or even higher in the future.

Therefore

, the

quality

of

air

and

water

will be poorer and difficult to find since it is already mixed with chemical substances.

As

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an

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instance,

people

will be more reluctant to dangerous diseases

such

as

tumor

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tumors

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and cancer.

Secondly

,

although

currently there are more farmers who produce various

kind

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kinds

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of fruits and vegetables organically, without chemical substances, in order to provide nutritious food for

people

, the price of these

source

of meals

are

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is

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quiet

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expensive for some

people

.

As a result

,

people

who may not be able to afford them will keep buying the cheaper mass-produced vegetables, ignoring the

facts

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fact

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that it can be unhealthy for their bodies.

This

condition will lead to an increasing case of

people

who

are

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lack

of

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nutrients

because they can not afford a healthy

source

of food. In conclusion,

people

’s health standard is predicted to be lower in the future than it is now because two elements

who

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play an important role in

human’s

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human

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life,

air

and

water

, will be more polluted which may cause dangerous diseases.

Additionally

, the best

quality

of food may not be accessible

for

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everyone, causing more cases of

people

who

are

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lack

of

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nutrients

.