The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The pie chart illustrates the proportion of Anthropology
graduates
engaged in different types of
work
after completing their honours course.
On the other hand
, the table gives the information about the earnings by three categories of job after 5 years.
Overall
, the most significant part of the
graduates
enrolled themselves in full-time
work
,
while
the lowest number of people's
work
history is unknown. In terms of their salary, freelance consultants earned almost double that of private companies' jobholders. After completing their graduation, 52% of
graduates
did full-time
work
, which is more than threefold than the part-time workers, where it is 15%.
Although
full-time post-grad studies and not known
shared
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to share
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the same percentage,
however
, the
unemployed
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unemployment
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rate was 12%. In the field of salary, most of the
graduates
earn more than 100000 US dollars, like freelance consultants 40%, government sector 50%, and private company
graduates
30%. The majority number of people from the freelance and government sectors earned more than 75,000 US dollars (freelance: 80%; government sector : 80%). In the field of private company above 50,000 dollar earners was around 30%.
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