The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced.
The following picture illustrates the production process of a biofuel named
Ethanol
. Use synonyms
This
process is actually a cycle, consisting of seven main steps.
Primarily, plants and trees use energies like sunlight and carbon dioxide to grow. Linking Words
Next,
these grown plants and trees are harvested mechanically and transported to the factory. Linking Words
Then
, they go under a special process called pre-processing which extracts cellulose from weeds by the use of a specific machine. In the next stage, cellulose is taken to a Linking Words
labratory
, where cellulose is Correct your spelling
laboratory
broke
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broken
to
smaller molecules called sugars. After adding microbes to the sugars, Change preposition
into
ethanol
is produced as the final product.
The manufactured Use synonyms
Ethanol
will be used by various vehicles, Use synonyms
such
as cars, buses, trucks, and Linking Words
also
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airplanes
. Burning Change the spelling
aeroplanes
ethanol
in vehicles' engines leads to carbon dioxide emission, which will be used by plants and trees to do photosynthesis and ultimately, thrive, constantly repeating the cycle of Use synonyms
ethanol
production.Use synonyms
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