The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced.

The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced.
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The following picture illustrates the production process of a biofuel named
Ethanol
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This
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process is actually a cycle, consisting of seven main steps. Primarily, plants and trees use energies like sunlight and carbon dioxide to grow.
Next,
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these grown plants and trees are harvested mechanically and transported to the factory.
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, they go under a special process called pre-processing which extracts cellulose from weeds by the use of a specific machine. In the next stage, cellulose is taken to a
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laboratory
, where cellulose is
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smaller molecules called sugars. After adding microbes to the sugars,
ethanol
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is produced as the final product. The manufactured
Ethanol
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will be used by various vehicles,
such
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as cars, buses, trucks, and
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airplanes
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. Burning
ethanol
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in vehicles' engines leads to carbon dioxide emission, which will be used by plants and trees to do photosynthesis and ultimately, thrive, constantly repeating the cycle of
ethanol
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production.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ethanol with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biomass
  • ethanol
  • fermentation
  • microorganisms
  • yeast
  • carbon dioxide
  • distillation
  • purification
  • dehydration
  • raw materials
  • storage
  • distribution
  • renewable energy
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • sustainable fuel
  • concentration
  • impurities
  • alcohol content
  • crop growth
  • conversion process
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