You lost your driving licence and someone found it and sent it back to you. Write a letter to the finder. In your letter -describe why the licence is important to you -ask where he or she found it -offer how would vou like to thank him/her

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Dear Sir/ Madam, Hope you are doing
good
Change the word
well
show examples
. I am writing
this
Linking Words
letter to thank you for the great help
for
Change preposition
in
show examples
sending my purse which I lost
last
Linking Words
month. First of all, I have no words to thank you for the help which I will never forget.
Last
Linking Words
month, on September 11 when I came back
to
Change preposition
apply
show examples
home from
work
Use synonyms
. I found that my
driver
Change noun form
driver's
show examples
license was not in my purse. I got panic at that time because it
is
Wrong verb form
was
show examples
very important for my
work
Use synonyms
as I drive
everyday
Replace the word
every day
show examples
. I tried to find it
everwhere
Correct your spelling
everywhere
show examples
in my house, car,
Use synonyms
work
Correct word choice
and work
show examples
but unfortunately at that time at lost
my
Correct pronoun usage
apply
show examples
hope. I went to
police
Add an article
the police
a police
show examples
station
for filing
Change preposition
to file
show examples
case
Correct article usage
a case
show examples
. I
work
Use synonyms
part-time as
Correct article usage
an uber
show examples
uber
Capitalize word
Uber
show examples
driver and I was so stressed. But
government
Correct article usage
the government
show examples
issued me
some
Correct determiner usage
a
show examples
temporary license
last
Linking Words
week. Still, I was very sad and yesterday I found your letter in which I got my license.Could you please tell me
from
Change preposition
apply
show examples
where you found it? Thank you so much once again for sending it to me. I really appreciate it, please let me know if you have some time so that we can meet someday. Hope to hear back soon Yours sincerely, Sim
Submitted by kaursaijbir on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

coherence cohesion
Consider dividing your letter into clear paragraphs, each focusing on a single idea to improve the logical flow of your message.
coherence cohesion
Try to refine your expression of emotions to be more streamlined. For example, you can combine expressions of gratitude with concise details to maintain a logical structure.
task achievement
The gratitude expressed is genuine and heartfelt, which is very suitable for the tone of the letter.
task achievement
The letter effectively addresses the tasks asked in the prompt: describing the importance of the license, asking how it was found, and offering thanks.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriately used and convey politeness.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: