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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
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The bar chart illustrates the number of residences in the US by their profits in every year in 2007, 2011 and 2015. The number is measured in millions.
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, from 2007 to 2015, household
income
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 distribution in the US saw fluctuations, with
households
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 earning $100,000 or more being the largest group in 2007 and surpassed by lower-
income
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groups
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 in 2011,
then
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 regaining the top spot by 2015 at about 33
million
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households
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. Other
income
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groups
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 remained relatively stable with small changes. In the beginning, the total of
households
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 with an
income
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 of around $100,000 or more was about 30
million
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, which is the highest among the other four household
income
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groups
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. Followed by the payment of homes around $25,000-49,999 and less than $25,000, the quantities of domestic units were approximately above 25
million
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 and 25
million
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, respectively. The gap between the volume of earnings from $50,000-$74,999 and $75,000-$99,999 were nearly 5
million
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. In 2011, the yields of $25,000-49,999 and less than $25,000 took over the counts of
households
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 with an
income
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 of around $100,000 as the majority data of
households
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 more or less almost 30
million
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 and 27
million
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. The sum of $50,000-$74,999 had the same number as 2007. Meanwhile, revenues of $100,000 or more and $75,000-$99,999 experienced a slight decrease of roughly 26
million
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 and 13
million
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.
At the end
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 of the period, the sum of $100,000 took over as the main count of household
groups
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 of approximately 33
million
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. The proceeds of $25,000-49,999 and less than $25,000 had similar data on people’s homes and the gap was only 2
million
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. The tally of $50,000-$74,999 did not change one
percent
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per cent
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 bit.
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, the payment of $75,000-$99,999 increased to become 15
million
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words income, households, groups, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic landscape
  • Household income
  • Economic health
  • Income brackets
  • Trends
  • Inflation
  • Unemployment rates
  • Job market
  • Income disparity
  • Housing affordability
  • Access to education
  • Quality of life
  • Economic policies
  • Income inequality
  • Mitigating
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