The graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the
percentage
of radio and TV audiences ( over the age of 4) during the day from 6am till 6am
in
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the next day in the UK, in 1992 between October and December.
Overall
, from the morning till
noon
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noon,
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the
percentage
of people who
listens
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listen
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to the radio is higher than the people who watch the television.
Moreover
, the
listeners
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listener's
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percentage
decreases
afte
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after
noon till midnight,
whereas
the number of watchers increases. From 6am till 8am the proportion of radio listeners grew gradually from almost 10% to around 30%, after that the amount declined significantly to around 12% by 2pm, followed by a slight rise at 5pm at 15%.
Furthermore
, the figure continued to fall till it reached 1% after midnight Regarding TV audiences, their
percentage
faced minor fluctuations from 5% to 3% (at 8am and 12pm respectively).
In addition
, the number grew dramatically till it reached almost 45% at 8pm. Followed by a significant decline
at
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almost 1% after midnight.
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