You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The diagram depicts how
bricks
are manufactured for the building industry. Overall
, there are 7 distinctive steps involved in the process
, from the initial stage of digging clay
to the eventual delivery of the finished product. The process
begin
with digging Change the verb form
begins
clay
with digger
. Correct article usage
a digger
Then
, the clay
is sieved with metal grind into smaller pieces. and sent to the roller. When the clay
is carried by the roller, sand and water is
applied to the Correct subject-verb agreement
are
clary
. Afterwards, Correct your spelling
clay
bricks
are made by either slicing the mixture or placing it into a mould. .
Replace the punctuation
.
...
Then
, bricks
are kept in drying
oven for 24 - 48 hours. In the next stage, the Correct article usage
a drying
bricks
go through a heating and cooling process
. Moderate and high temperature ranging from 200c to 1300c is applied to the bricks
in a kiln . The heating process
is followed by a cooling process
in a cooling chamber for 2 - 3 days. Finally
, the bricks
are packed and despatched
to their final destination.Correct your spelling
dispatched
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bricks, process, clay with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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