Nowadays media covers many things that are happening with famous
people
in
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way, many
people
believe it has a negative
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on young
people
.
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essay completely agrees with the statement and will give a reasonable conclusion.
There are two vital effects which can affect youngsters.
To commence, when celebrities or news are covered, they make children focus more on social media
instead
of their studies
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. Students
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become obsessed with everything famous
people
do, they watch every post in every app they use and they turn the
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on so they don't be late for their posts.
Consequently
, students
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absent
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school, do not study for their exams and neglect their assignments.
For instance
, teenagers who like Taylor Swift signer are waiting for her
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to drop at 9 AM,
instead
of going to school and
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to the song after coming back they
choseWrong verb form
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to be absent so they can enjoy it on time.
In addition
, children can spend a large amount of money to be like their loved ones. They buy from celebrities brand even if the item does not
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them, and
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everything the famous person
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.
This
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pressure on parents who trying to make their kids happy. they
are Change the verb form
are also worn
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also
wear like those stars and make hair cuts like them and match their act.
This
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their mental health in
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noted way.
For example
, kids are being lonely because of
overuseCorrect article usage
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of technology
while
they are watching all
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happen in
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.
In conclusion, parents should be aware of the
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of Change preposition
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what celebrities can
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their children, it
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themCorrect pronoun usage
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on Change preposition
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lifetimes and daily tasks.
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, making them
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overspendingReplace the word
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and
destroyCorrect subject-verb agreement
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their healthcare.
A goodCorrect article usage
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knowledge
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kids from many harms.