The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the process of production of
sugar
from sugar
cane
. In recent years sugar
has become the important product that each family has and it is known as wight gold.
First of all, after planting sugar
cane
and waiting for it to grow for nearly one to two years, then
farmers start harvesting them either by using manual tools or by tillage. After that, workers use a crashing machine in order to extract juice
from sugar
cane
.
Following that, the next step is
purifying juice
, which workers use a filter made of limestone, the juice
is placed under heat in an evaporator, so juice
becomes as syrupy. The syrup is placed in a centrifuge in order to separate out sugar
crystals and water; however
, before the sugar
crystals are packaged, they are set aside to dry and cool.
To sum up
, the manufacturing process of sugar
has a 7-stage, man-made and linear process. It begins with sugar
cane
cultivation and ends with dried and cooled sugar
crystals.Submitted by ghazl.1998g on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sugar, cane, juice with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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