The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates
number
of accidents each thousand vehicles in four nations from 1990 to 1999.
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a number
the number
overall
, Great Britain had th
highest rate of Correct your spelling
the
thefts
, Fix the agreement mistake
theft
while
Canada had the lowest, France
had a slight fluctuation but remained the same.
At the beginning of 1990, Geat
Britain fluctuated between approximately 17 and 20, and Correct your spelling
Great
then
increased to about 16 by the end of the period, Sweden on the other hand
, started on
about 8, and had a slight increase to 1996, Change preposition
at
then
stayed the same for a small period, but ended up rising.
France
had a modest oscillate
throughout the period but, had a Replace the word
oscillation
minore
drop Correct your spelling
minor
at
1999. Canada Change preposition
in
on the other hand
, started just above France
, had a modest decline, then
remained steady and similar to France
, ended at about 6.Submitted by miss batool on
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