The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates
number
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of accidents each thousand vehicles in four nations from 1990 to 1999.
overall
, Great Britain had
th
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the
highest rate of
thefts
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theft
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,
while
Canada had the lowest,
France
had a slight fluctuation but remained the same. At the beginning of 1990,
Geat
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Britain fluctuated between approximately 17 and 20, and
then
increased to about 16 by the end of the period, Sweden
on the other hand
, started
on
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about 8, and had a slight increase to 1996,
then
stayed the same for a small period, but ended up rising.
France
had a modest
oscillate
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throughout the period but, had a
minore
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minor
drop
at
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1999. Canada
on the other hand
, started just above
France
, had a modest decline,
then
remained steady and similar to
France
, ended at about 6.
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