The chart belo gives information about the ratio of income to spending (in dollars) by American by age range in 2013. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram describes how much
money
was earned and spent by Americans in every age group in 2013.
In general, people in every age range acquired more money
than they spent except for those who were under 25.
According to
the chart, people aged 35-54 earned the most money
among any other group with the number of nearly 80000 dollars
and also
they consumed probably 60000 dollars
. As a result
, the margin was about 20000 dollars
. Likewise
, people who were 55-64 years old held a comparable profit. Besides
, the revenue they obtained followed the 35-54 age group with a number 75000.
On the other hand
, of all bodies, youngsters (under 25) had 29000 dollars
on average, the lowest income. The worst thing was it cost even more money
than they attained and they spent 30000 dollars
. Therefore
, the result was a deficit.
Furthermore
, the elderly (75 plus) acquired the equivalent amount of money
as they consumed. The figure was approximately 35000, which was the second last
earnings among other groups.Submitted by hayashidajinja820 on
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