The chart belo gives information about the ratio of income to spending (in dollars) by American by age range in 2013. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram describes how much
money
was earned and spent by Americans in every age group in 2013.
In general, people in every age range acquired more Use synonyms
money
than they spent except for those who were under 25.
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According to
the chart, people aged 35-54 earned the most Linking Words
money
among any other group with the number of nearly 80000 Use synonyms
dollars
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also
they consumed probably 60000 Linking Words
dollars
. Use synonyms
As a result
, the margin was about 20000 Linking Words
dollars
. Use synonyms
Likewise
, people who were 55-64 years old held a comparable profit. Linking Words
Besides
, the revenue they obtained followed the 35-54 age group with a number 75000.
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On the other hand
, of all bodies, youngsters (under 25) had 29000 Linking Words
dollars
on average, the lowest income. The worst thing was it cost even more Use synonyms
money
than they attained and they spent 30000 Use synonyms
dollars
. Use synonyms
Therefore
, the result was a deficit.
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Furthermore
, the elderly (75 plus) acquired the equivalent amount of Linking Words
money
as they consumed. The figure was approximately 35000, which was the second Use synonyms
last
earnings among other groups.Linking Words
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