The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.

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The pie chart represents the proportion of how dangerous waste products are dealt with

the

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United

Kingdom

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, Sweden and

Republic

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the Republic

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of Korea.

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, the largest proportion of the chart was occupied by recycling

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the Republic of Korea,

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United

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the United

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Kingdom

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represented the smallest share.

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, Sweden and

United

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the United

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Kingdom

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figures

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a significant majority of the underground. The given information and details

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comprised the bulk of dangerous waste products in the United

Kingdom

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(82%) are hidden underground,

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these

depicts

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for

chemical

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chemicals

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, dumping at the sea, and incineration treatments are much lower, with 8%,8% and 2% respectively.

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is not

apply

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this

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land.

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, the highest proportion of dangerous waste products in the Republic of Korea is recycling (69%).

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hand

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underground and incineration methods were only 22% and 9%.Underground is just over half in the Sweden.

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two ways recycled(25%) and (20%) are burned.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words kingdom with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "represents" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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150 words

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The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.

Many people today are choosing to travel to other countries. Why is that happening? Is this a positive or negative development?

In some countries, more and more people are hiring a professional fitness trainer, rather than playing sports or doing exercise classes What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

The diagram details the process of making smoked fish

Some people think that the government should establish free libraries in each town. Others, however, believe that it is a waste of money since the public can use the Internet at home to obtain information. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

In some countries, secondary schools aim to provide a general education across a range of subjects. In others, children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career. Which do you think is appropriate in today’s world?