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The picture gives the

equipments

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equipment

types of equipment

pieces of equipment

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and

stage

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that we can use for recycling

plastic

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bottles

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Overall

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, there are nine stages to

plastic

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bottles

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. Four

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pieces of equipments

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equipments

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equipment

for recycling,

such

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apply

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crushing, washing, producing and compressing.

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one

ingredients

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ingredient

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. The four equipments

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are

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created for recycling

plastic

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. In the first

stage

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of recycling

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a bottle

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bottles

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bottle

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bottle,

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there is one person

that

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who

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throws in the

trush

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trash

tge

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the

bottle for

reprocess

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reprocessing

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the

trush

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trash

is going to the recycling centre. The worker in the centre is sorting the

bottles

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. Afterward

sorting

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apply

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plastic

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bottles

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compressing

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were sorted

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into

block

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blocks

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for crushing in

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one

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of the equipment.

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Secondly

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step of crushing

bottle

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the bottle

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is, they are washing the processing

while

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they are crushing.

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The next

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stage

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is producing

plastic

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pellets for the seventh

stage

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, before the raw material.

Following

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The following

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step is

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lastly

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the last step

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of the process. It is producing end products. So the final process is, after all the stages ready to be used for recycling

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bottles

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words stage, plastic, bottles with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 1 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
23
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

156 words

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