The diagram below shows the process of recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. af

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The picture gives the

equipments

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equipment

types of equipment

pieces of equipment

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and

stage

that we can use for recycling

plastic

bottles

Overall

, there are nine stages to

plastic

bottles

. Four

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pieces of equipments

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equipments

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equipment

for recycling,

such

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apply

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crushing, washing, producing and compressing.

Also

one

ingredients

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ingredient

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. The four equipments

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are

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created for recycling

plastic

. In the first

stage

of recycling

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a bottle

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bottles

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bottle

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bottle,

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there is one person

that

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who

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throws in the

trush

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trash

tge

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the

bottle for

reprocess

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reprocessing

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Then

the

trush

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trash

is going to the recycling centre. The worker in the centre is sorting the

bottles

. Afterward

sorting

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apply

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plastic

bottles

compressing

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were sorted

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into

block

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blocks

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for crushing in

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one

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of the equipment.

Secondly

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The second

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step of crushing

bottle

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the bottle

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is, they are washing the processing

while

they are crushing.

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The next

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stage

is producing

plastic

pellets for the seventh

stage

, before the raw material.

Following

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The following

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step is

lastly

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the last step

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of the process. It is producing end products. So the final process is, after all the stages ready to be used for recycling

plastic

bottles

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Vocabulary: Replace the words stage, plastic, bottles with synonyms.

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3Word repetition
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3 paragraphs

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