The diagram below shows the process of recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. af

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the process of recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. af

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The picture gives the

equipments

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equipment

types of equipment

pieces of equipment

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and

stage

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that we can use for recycling

plastic

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bottles

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Overall

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, there are nine stages to

plastic

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bottles

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. Four

Correct quantifier usage

pieces of equipments

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equipments

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equipment

for recycling,

such

Linking Words

Unnecessary verb

apply

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crushing, washing, producing and compressing.

Also

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one

ingredients

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ingredient

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. The four equipments

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are

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created for recycling

plastic

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. In the first

stage

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of recycling

Correct article usage

a bottle

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Fix the agreement mistake

bottles

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bottle

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bottle,

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there is one person

that

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who

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throws in the

trush

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trash

tge

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the

bottle for

reprocess

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reprocessing

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Then

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the

trush

Correct your spelling

trash

is going to the recycling centre. The worker in the centre is sorting the

bottles

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. Afterward

sorting

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apply

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plastic

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bottles

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compressing

Wrong verb form

were sorted

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into

block

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blocks

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for crushing in

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one

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of the equipment.

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Secondly

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The second

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step of crushing

bottle

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the bottle

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is, they are washing the processing

while

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they are crushing.

Correct article usage

The next

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stage

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is producing

plastic

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pellets for the seventh

stage

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, before the raw material.

Following

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The following

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step is

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lastly

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the last step

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of the process. It is producing end products. So the final process is, after all the stages ready to be used for recycling

plastic

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bottles

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words stage, plastic, bottles with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 1 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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7
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
23
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

156 words

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