The diagram below shows the process of recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. an

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The picture below illustrates the

plastic

products

recycling and manufacturing a new product

Overall

, the process consists of nine stages. Starting with throwing out the

plastic

bottles,

and

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apply

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taking

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them

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to the sorting place, sorting them,

crushing

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crushing them

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, and ending up

with

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apply

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producing

a new

Correct the article-noun agreement

new products

a new product

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products

. After throwing the bottle in the garbage, a special lorry will deliver the containers to the recycling

center

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centre

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to sort them into different categories. Sorted

products

will be compressed into blocks. Later they will be crushed in a crusher and thoroughly washed. In the following stage, the washed

products

will be produced into

plastic

pellets.

Plastic

pellets will be heated to form raw material

after

this

stage they will become a raw material.

For instance

: food containers,

colorful

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colourful

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pencils, packages, and even clothes. And in the end, they will be available for use.

After

this

, the process will constantly recur because it is

such

a loop

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2Word repetition
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4 paragraphs

151 words

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Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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