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The diagram below shows the process of recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. an

The diagram below shows the process of recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. an
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The picture below illustrates the
plastic
products
 recycling and manufacturing a new product
Overall
, the process consists of nine stages. Starting with throwing out the
plastic
 bottles,
and
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taking
it
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them
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 to the sorting place, sorting them,
crushing
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crushing them
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, and ending up
with
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apply
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producing
a new
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new products
a new product
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products
. After throwing the bottle in the garbage, a special lorry will deliver the containers to the recycling
center
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centre
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 to sort them into different categories. Sorted
products
 will be compressed into blocks. Later they will be crushed in a crusher and thoroughly washed. In the following stage, the washed
products
 will be produced into
plastic
 pellets.
Plastic
 pellets will be heated to form raw material
after
this
 stage they will become a raw material.
For instance
: food containers,
colorful
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 pencils, packages, and even clothes. And in the end, they will be available for use.
After
this
, the process will constantly recur because it is
such
 a loop
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Recycling process
  • Disposal
  • Collection
  • Sorting
  • Cleaning
  • Contaminants
  • Recycling center
  • Plastic flakes
  • Melting
  • Re-shaping
  • Raw materials
  • Transformation
  • Repurposing
  • End products
  • Variety
  • Sustainability
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