The diagram below shows the process of recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. aa
The illustration shows and represents information about recycling
plastic
bottles
Overall
this
process includes nine stages which starts
with collecting Change the verb form
start
plastic
bottles and ends with producing new things. It continues again and again due to
throwing these things, products
away.
Correct word choice
and products
Recycling
process after collecting bottles continues sorting them manually. After sorted Correct article usage
The recycling
plastic
goes to compressor
and Add an article
the compressor
turned
into big blocks. Every block crushes and washes at the same time in one stage. Add a missing verb
is turned
Then
starts
producing Correct subject-verb agreement
start
plastic
pellets, these small pieces of plastic
before becoming new row
materials, will be heated, Correct your spelling
raw
with
Correct word choice
and with
this
material will be done
new useful products.Unnecessary verb
apply
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic with synonyms.
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