The diagram below shows the process of recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. aa

The diagram below shows the process of recycling plastic bottles.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. aa
The illustration shows and represents information about recycling
plastic
bottles
Overall
this
process includes nine stages which
starts
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start
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with collecting
plastic
bottles and ends with producing new things. It continues again and again
due to
throwing these things,
products
Correct word choice
and products
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away.
Recycling
Correct article usage
The recycling
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process after collecting bottles continues sorting them manually. After sorted
plastic
goes to
compressor
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the compressor
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and
turned
Add a missing verb
is turned
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into big blocks. Every block crushes and washes at the same time in one stage.
Then
starts
Correct subject-verb agreement
start
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producing
plastic
pellets, these small pieces of
plastic
before becoming new
row
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raw
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materials, will be heated,
with
Correct word choice
and with
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this
material will be
done
Unnecessary verb
apply
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new useful products.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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