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The diagram below shows the process of recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. aa

The diagram below shows the process of recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. aa
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The illustration shows and represents information about recycling
plastic
Use synonyms
 bottles
Overall
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this
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 process includes nine stages which
starts
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start
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 with collecting
plastic
Use synonyms
 bottles and ends with producing new things. It continues again and again
due to
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 throwing these things,
products
Correct word choice
and products
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 away.
Recycling
Correct article usage
The recycling
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 process after collecting bottles continues sorting them manually. After sorted
plastic
Use synonyms
 goes to
compressor
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the compressor
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 and
turned
Add a missing verb
is turned
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 into big blocks. Every block crushes and washes at the same time in one stage.
Then
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starts
Correct subject-verb agreement
start
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 producing
plastic
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 pellets, these small pieces of
plastic
Use synonyms
 before becoming new
row
Correct your spelling
raw
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 materials, will be heated,
with
Correct word choice
and with
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this
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 material will be
done
Unnecessary verb
apply
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new useful products.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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