the line graph shows thefts per thousands vehciles four countries between 1990 and 1999.

the line graph shows thefts per thousands vehciles four countries between 1990 and 1999.
The graph
illusrates
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illustrates
the number of
thefts
per
thousand
vehciles
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vehicles
in four countries (Great Britain, Sweden,
France
, and Canada) from 1990 to 1999.
Overall
, Great Britain had the highest theft rate throughout the
period
,
while
Canada had the lowest.
France
and Sweden showed moderate fluctuations, but both saw increases by the end of the
period
. At the beginning of the
period
, Great Britain fluctuated between 17 and 20
thefts
per
thousand
vehicles, ending with a slight rise to 20 in 1999.
In contrast
, Sweden began with about 8
thefts
per
thousand
vehicles,
steadilt
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steadily
increasing to 16 by the end of the
period
.
France
showed a modest fluctuation, remaining stable for much of the
period
but ending with a minor
deop
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drop
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in 1999. Canada, which started just above
France
,
also
showed a steady decline, finishing with the lowest rate of approximately 6
thefts
per
thousand
vehicles.
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