The pie charts and table illustrates the information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US in the years 1988, 1992, and 2000.

The pie charts and table illustrates the information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US in the years 1988, 1992, and 2000.
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The charts and the table illustrate data on the total sum of
fish
and the percentages of countries that exported
fish
to the US in three separate years (1988, 1992, and 2000). The
overall
value saw an upward trend during the period between 1988 and 2000, from 6.57 to 10.72. The main source of
fish
in the US was from Canada,
whereas
the proportion of it sharply dropped in 1992 and 2000, eventually to be almost one second lower than before. China, the origin of
fish
which accounted for about 27%, its percentage increased from 1988 to 1992 but showed a decrease in 2000. The other countries had the least number of
fish
sources in 1988;
however
, the
statistic
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of them grew steadily and exceeded China in 2000, from 13% to 30%, which was three times more than the proportion in 1988. In summary, the information about the amount of dollars of
fish
climbed in the past 12 years.
Moreover
, the figure shows a rising trend in China and other countries
while
it declined in Canada.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Import origins
  • Total import value
  • Trends in import values
  • Trade patterns
  • Source distribution
  • Import dependency
  • Fluctuations in trade
  • Economic implications
  • Demand and supply dynamics
  • International trade policies
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