Writing task 1 The graph below shows the percentage of river water in the UK that is of good chemical quality, in the period between 1990 and 2002.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of good chemical
qualities
present in the river water in the UK over the period 1990 to 2002.
Overall
, it is evident that Wales had the highest amount of good chemical quality
in 1990, whereas
, scotland's
river had Change the capitalization
Scotland's
least
good chemical Correct article usage
the least
quality
.
To begin
with, Wales's rivers
water Change the noun form
river
qualities
changed Fix the agreement mistake
quality
though out
the period starting from around 95% in 1990 and Change preposition
throughout
dropped
to 80% in 2002. Meanwhile, Wrong verb form
dropping
opposite
trend was observed in Add an article
the opposite
an opposite
rivers
of the
North Ireland, where good chemical Correct article usage
apply
quality
started at roughly 85% and increased to more than 90% in 2002.
Furthermore
, England's rivers
had more than 40% of good chemical quality
in 1990, increased
to 70% in 1996, after six years Correct pronoun usage
which increased
qualities
accounted at
slightly less than 50%. In Scotland, more than 20% of Change preposition
for
qualities
Fix the agreement mistake
quality
were
found in Correct subject-verb agreement
was
rivers
, which increased to 70% in 2000, but after two years quality
declined by 20%.Submitted by merujain2221 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words qualities, quality, rivers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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