The table below gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different

diets.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make

comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart describes the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different kinds of
diet
. The biggest quantity of carbohydrates we see in the healthy
diet
for sport,
while
the percentage of fat is the lowest. In the average and healthy
diet
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the number of fat is the same, 20%. People, who consume the
diet
for sport have 15% of fat, which is 5% less than for the healthy and average
diet
.
However
,
diet
for
sport
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consumers eat
the
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60% of carbohydrates, which is 20% higher than in the average
diet
and 10% higher than in the healthy
diet
. The third compound shown in the chart is protein. Protein constitutes
one fourth
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of the healthy
diet
,
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and constitutes 40% and 30%
for
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of
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the average
diet
and healthy
diet
 relatively.
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