The table below gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart describes the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different kinds of
diet
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. The biggest quantity of carbohydrates we see in the healthy
diet
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for sport,
while
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the percentage of fat is the lowest. In the average and healthy
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diet
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diet,
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the number of fat is the same, 20%. People, who consume the
diet
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for sport have 15% of fat, which is 5% less than for the healthy and average
diet
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.
However
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diet
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for
sport
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consumers eat
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60% of carbohydrates, which is 20% higher than in the average
diet
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and 10% higher than in the healthy
diet
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. The third compound shown in the chart is protein. Protein constitutes
one fourth
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of the healthy
diet
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,
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and constitutes 40% and 30%
for
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of
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the average
diet
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and healthy
diet
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 relatively.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words diet with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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