The table below gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart describes the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different kinds of
diet
.
The biggest quantity of carbohydrates we see in the healthy Use synonyms
diet
for sport, Use synonyms
while
the percentage of fat is the lowest. In the average and healthy Linking Words
Use synonyms
diet
the number of fat is the same, 20%.
People, who consume the Add a comma
diet,
diet
for sport have 15% of fat, which is 5% less than for the healthy and average Use synonyms
diet
. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
diet
for Use synonyms
sport
consumers eat Fix the agreement mistake
sports
the
60% of carbohydrates, which is 20% higher than in the average Correct article usage
apply
diet
and 10% higher than in the healthy Use synonyms
diet
.
The third compound shown in the chart is protein. Protein constitutes Use synonyms
one fourth
of the healthy Add a hyphen
one-fourth
diet
Use synonyms
,
and constitutes 40% and 30% Remove the comma
apply
for
the average Change preposition
of
diet
and healthy Use synonyms
diet
relatively.Use synonyms
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