You have recently moved to a new aparatment. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: •explain why you have moved •describe your new apartment •invite him/her to pay a visit

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Dear John Smith, The purpose of writing

this

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letter to you for invite you and your family to our housewarming which we have moved recently to another

house

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with my family members. In the first place I have to mention that

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there are not any amenities, which are necessary to reside, the rent of the

house

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is quite expensive to pay.

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, there is heavy noise which always starts bright and early because of the traffic light is located near to our old

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. We have moved to a suburban area of the city with our family members to live in a new and modern apartment. Coming to the description of a new

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, there are enough conveniences to stay in and

surrounded

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by natural scenery,

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as mountains, lakes, and gardens as well.

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that, there is a pool to learn swimming activities and

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a playground for my children to play outdoor games.

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, I am sending you an invitation to come with your family to relax or escape the concerns of work. If you visit there, I will be happy and we will spend time together. Hoping that you will receive my invitation and come with your family. I will wait for your reply at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely, Omadi

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coherence cohesion

Ensure clarity between main ideas and supporting details. Consider separating the purpose of the letter and the details about the move.

coherence cohesion

Try to keep each paragraph focused on a single main idea to enhance clarity for the reader.

task achievement

Provide a bit more detail on why the new location and apartment are advantageous beyond noise and cost issues, if possible.

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The letter has a friendly and inviting tone appropriate for a letter to a friend.

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The letter includes an informative description of the new location.

coherence cohesion

Effective use of greetings and closings contributes to the sense of communication.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

216 words

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