You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: In some countries, crime rates are increasing. What are the causes of this problem? What can be done about it?

In today's society, some

countries

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are struggling with

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rising

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rates

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, and it is considered that the tendency of high

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rates

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is more serious in

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developing

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.

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, there are several reasons, but I think the high poverty rate and the lack of capacities of the

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governments'

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monitoring system are the main causes. 　First of all, the

crime

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rates

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and the poverty

rates

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are statistically

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correlated

because people living

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in

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poor

situation

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situations

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might steal money, credit cards, or expensive products from

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others to survive their lives.

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, it is often said that

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developing

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especially slum areas are dangerous. In order to reduce the

crime

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rates

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in less developed

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,

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governments

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should come up with different approaches and appropriate solutions for

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economic growth. 　

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, the low capacity of the

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to monitor their societies is one of the contributors to deteriorating the safety of the

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.

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, giving bribes to policies frequently occurs mostly in developing

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and

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problem might have been overlooked by the

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, if the country wants to realize

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safe environment, the government should strictly observe these issues and prohibit

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bribes by law.

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, illegal

trades

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trade

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also

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been raised as

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problem as

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globalization has developed. Some people argue that the illegal trades have led to the increase of

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crimes, and the government system to legally restrict these trades still needs to improve. 　In conclusion, there is a variety of

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reasons causing the high

crime

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rates

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, but I personally think that the root cause is the absence of

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governments'

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government's

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capacity to handle the issues. The

governments

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have to establish

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a strong

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, organized monitoring structure

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if they desire to realize

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safe society without crimes.