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The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart provides a comparison of the number of
films
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 produced by five different
countries
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 (A, B,
C
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, D, and
E
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) over a three-year period from 2007 to 2009.
Overall
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,
country
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 A consistently led in film
production
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 throughout the period, maintaining a stable output of around 80
films
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 each year.
In contrast
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,
country
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E
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 produced the fewest
films
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, with figures below 10 for each of the three years. Notably,
country
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C
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 showed the most dramatic increase in
production
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,
while
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countries
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 B and D experienced relatively minor fluctuations. In 2007,
country
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 A produced just over 80
films
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,
while
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country
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 B followed at approximately 50.
Countries
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C
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, D, and
E
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 contributed significantly fewer
films
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, with
country
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C
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 producing just under 10, and
countries
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 D and
E
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 each producing around 5. By 2009, the number of
films
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 produced by
country
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 A remained stable,
while
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country
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 B’s output slightly decreased.
However
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,
country
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C
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 saw a substantial increase, rising from around 10
films
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 in 2007 to nearly 60
films
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 in 2009. Meanwhile, film
production
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 in
countries
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 D and
E
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 remained fairly consistent throughout the period, both showing only minor variations. In summary,
country
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 A was the dominant film producer across all three years,
while
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country
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C
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 experienced the most rapid growth.
Countries
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 D and
E
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 maintained modest
production
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 levels with minimal change.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words films, countries, c, e, country, production with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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