These days a lot of
people
argue that social
media
have a negative impact on both
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and society. I completely disagree with
this
statement.
Firstly
, using social
media
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people
to connect with each other.
Secondly
, social networking
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individuals create their own work which
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them able to earn money.
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two sides. it can be a big
chance
for some
people
while
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life for others. Social networking sites
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the best way to
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a new culture around the world.
Although
you have an option to travel and visit new places, it's
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interesting thing to visit these places
while
you are in your home.
For example
, a study at Harvard University shows that around 85% of
people
in 2020
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discovering countries and cities
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social
media
compared
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by themselves. Plus it
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individuals to call each other.
Moreover
,
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years there
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a rise in
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of technology which
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a lot of
people
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and make their own
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.
For instance
, when I graduated from university I started my own small business
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Instagram
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me to gain money until I
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my first job. Now a lot of companies and individuals work by social
media
.
To sum up
, I disagree with
people
who believe that social networking just
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a negative impact
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society. There are
people
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a
chance
to see the world
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social
media
and have a
chance
to
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and
exploring aboutWrong verb form
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the whole world. and there are
people
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a
chance
to
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and get money
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social
media
.