Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruot and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or out of season. Some consider it a good idea, some are not. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
A considerable amount of people think enlarge usage of air
transport
to import
fruits and vegetable
from one nation to another where habitation is not good to grow Fix the agreement mistake
vegetables
such
vegetation is good
option Add an article
a good
while
other
Fix the agreement mistake
others
opines
that Correct subject-verb agreement
opine
its
Correct your spelling
it is
bad
idea. Correct article usage
a bad
According to
me, it is good
idea to Change the article
a good
import
vegetables to other countries will provide global trade their people have excess
Correct article usage
the excess
to
nutrition that they need but it has Change preposition
apply
bad
impact on local marketing and Add an article
a bad
Correct article usage
the enviornment
enviornment
.
The main Correct your spelling
environment
benefits
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benefit
to use
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of using
airplane
to Fix the agreement mistake
airplanes
transport
fruit and vegetables enable
countries to Correct subject-verb agreement
enables
enagage
Correct your spelling
engage
global
trade. From Change preposition
in global
consumers
perspective, they have Change noun form
consumer's
consumers'
all
variety of Correct determiner usage
a
food
that provide nutrition for their healthy diet. Fix the agreement mistake
foods
For example
, Some countries like Jamaica or India can not grow some
variety of foods like Correct determiner usage
a
avacado
and dragon fruit because these fruits need proper soil and weather. Avacado Correct your spelling
avocado
is
good Correct subject-verb agreement
are
food
for healthy
body and it is possible to Add an article
a healthy
import
these food
to their country Fix the agreement mistake
foods
provide
everyone Correct word choice
and provide
good
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with good
food
by aircrafts
. Correct your spelling
aircraft
Airplane
is Change the spelling
Aeroplane
fast
mode of Add an article
a fast
Transport
to import
thing
Fix the agreement mistake
things
here
to there rapidly.
Change preposition
from here
On the other hand
, Airplane
significantly contributes to carbon emission
, which Fix the agreement mistake
emissions
is
dangerous for Correct subject-verb agreement
are
Correct article usage
the enviorment
enviorment
. It Correct your spelling
environment
contribute
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contributes
in
Global Warming and economic impact. Change preposition
to
However
, it may put
Verb problem
have
negative
effect on local farmer communities as it may suppress market prices.
Add an article
a negative
To conclude
, Add an article
the airplane
an airplane
airplane
is Change the spelling
aeroplane
fast
mode of Add an article
a fast
transport
and beneficial as well to
Change preposition
for importing
import
vegetables and fruits from one country to another. It is beneficial for global trade and for healthy relationship
in the world. For local farmers, Fix the agreement mistake
relationships
government
needs to provide Add an article
the government
them
best prices for their Correct your spelling
the
food
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coherence cohesion
To enhance coherence and cohesion, introduce clear transition phrases or linking words between ideas to help the reader follow your arguments more easily. This includes the transition between the views you are discussing.
task achievement
Discuss the task more comprehensively by exploring both sides of the argument in a balanced way and explain your opinion in more detail.
general advice
Check for grammatical errors and improve sentence structure to maintain the clarity and professionalism of your writing.
task achievement
The essay presents a relevant example by discussing specific fruits that cannot be grown in certain countries.
coherence cohesion
There is a clear attempt to provide a structure with an introduction, body paragraphs discussing both views, and a conclusion.
Fully explain your ideas
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- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
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- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
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