Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruot and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or out of season. Some consider it a good idea, some are not. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

A considerable amount of people think enlarge usage of air
transport
to
import
fruits and
vegetable
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vegetables
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from one nation to another where habitation is not good to grow
such
vegetation is
good
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a good
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option
while
other
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others
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opines
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opine
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that
its
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it is
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bad
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a bad
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idea.
According to
me, it is
good
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a good
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idea to
import
vegetables to other countries will provide global trade their people have
excess
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the excess
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to
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apply
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nutrition that they need but it has
bad
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a bad
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impact on local marketing and
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the enviornment
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enviornment
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environment
. The main
benefits
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benefit
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to use
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of using
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airplane
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airplanes
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to
transport
fruit and vegetables
enable
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enables
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countries to
enagage
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engage
global
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in global
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trade. From
consumers
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consumer's
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perspective, they have
all
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a
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variety of
food
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foods
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that provide nutrition for their healthy diet.
For example
, Some countries like Jamaica or India can not grow
some
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a
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variety of foods like
avacado
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avocado
and dragon fruit because these fruits need proper soil and weather. Avacado
is
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are
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good
food
for
healthy
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a healthy
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body and it is possible to
import
these
food
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foods
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to their country
provide
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and provide
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everyone
good
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with good
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food
by
aircrafts
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aircraft
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.
Airplane
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Aeroplane
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is
fast
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a fast
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mode of
Transport
to
import
thing
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things
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here
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from here
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to there rapidly.
On the other hand
,
Airplane
significantly contributes to carbon
emission
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emissions
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, which
is
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are
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dangerous for
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the enviorment
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enviorment
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environment
. It
contribute
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contributes
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in
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to
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Global Warming and economic impact.
However
, it may
put
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negative
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a negative
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effect on local farmer communities as it may suppress market prices.
To conclude
,
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the airplane
an airplane
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airplane
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aeroplane
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is
fast
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a fast
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mode of
transport
and beneficial as well
to
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for importing
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import
vegetables and fruits from one country to another. It is beneficial for global trade and for healthy
relationship
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relationships
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in the world. For local farmers,
government
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the government
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needs to provide
them
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the
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best prices for their
food
.
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coherence cohesion
To enhance coherence and cohesion, introduce clear transition phrases or linking words between ideas to help the reader follow your arguments more easily. This includes the transition between the views you are discussing.
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Discuss the task more comprehensively by exploring both sides of the argument in a balanced way and explain your opinion in more detail.
general advice
Check for grammatical errors and improve sentence structure to maintain the clarity and professionalism of your writing.
task achievement
The essay presents a relevant example by discussing specific fruits that cannot be grown in certain countries.
coherence cohesion
There is a clear attempt to provide a structure with an introduction, body paragraphs discussing both views, and a conclusion.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • perishable goods
  • carbon emissions
  • global trade
  • seasonal availability
  • food security
  • carbon footprint
  • local farmers
  • import/export balance
  • nutritional intake
  • market prices
  • public health
  • diet diversity
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