The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
The chart provides information on the popularity of a bus, car, bike, and foot in some European
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in 1960, 1980, and 2000. The data clearly illustrate the upward trend in the utilization of cars. In the case of a car rapid growth has been witnessed throughout the period. Beginning with only 7 thousand in 1960 in the following years a dramatic increase was presented to 25,000 in 1980 and peaking at 37,000 in 2000.
On the other hand
, the utilization of the bas remained on a relatively similar level. It began with 20,000 in 1960 and despite a moderate growth to 26,000 in 1980, it experienced a slight fall to 18,000 in 2000.
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transportation by bike and by foot followed a different pattern witnessing a dramatic descent. Bike, which started at 26,000 had been constantly decreasing to 23,000 and,
then
, to 7,000 in 1980 and 2000, respectively.
Similarly
, transportation by foot which began with 35,000 in 1960 decreased to 16,000 in 1980 and,
subsequently
, only to 10,000 in 2000.
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