The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
The chart provides information on the popularity of a bus, car, bike, and foot in some European
city
in 1960, 1980, and 2000. The data clearly illustrate the upward trend in the utilization of cars.
In the case of a car rapid growth has been witnessed throughout the period. Beginning with only 7 thousand in 1960 in the following years a dramatic increase was presented to 25,000 in 1980 and peaking at 37,000 in 2000. Fix the agreement mistake
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On the other hand
, the utilization of the bas remained on a relatively similar level. It began with 20,000 in 1960 and despite a moderate growth to 26,000 in 1980, it experienced a slight fall to 18,000 in 2000.
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transportation by bike and by foot followed a different pattern witnessing a dramatic descent. Bike, which started at 26,000 had been constantly decreasing to 23,000 and, Remove the article
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, to 7,000 in 1980 and 2000, respectively. Linking Words
Similarly
, transportation by foot which began with 35,000 in 1960 decreased to 16,000 in 1980 and, Linking Words
subsequently
, only to 10,000 in 2000.Linking Words
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