The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selectting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The provided diagram illustrates the
process
of a certain coal as a raw material for producing electricity
. Overall
, there are eight steps which have to be done before the electricity
can be used by houses or industries.
To begin
with, the process
starts with mining the coal, and then
it is crushed into small particles by a crusher. After the coal is crushed, it then
will be collected in one place. next,
it will be carried by using a lorry to the trucks. After
this
point, the process
are becoming more into changing the form of the coal, the coal from the truck is then
brought to a gasifier to separate the gas
and solid waste.
After the gas
evaporates, it next passes the cooling process
using a cooler to lower the temperature. If the gas
has been cooled, it is then
transferred to a gas
power plant to produce electricity
, but at this
stage heat waste is produced. Finally
, the electricity
is ready to use for homes or industries.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, electricity, gas with synonyms.
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