The charts give information about employment in the UK in 1998 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts compare the percentage of
people
, divided by gender, who are
employed in the UK in 1988 and 2012. Wrong verb form
were
Overall
, men who worked full-time had the biggest share among other categories in both years.
In 1988, full-time men
employees accounted for more than half with around 12500 Correct your spelling
male
people
. By contrast
, male part-timers allocated for
just 6% with 1550 workers. Change preposition
apply
On the other hand
, the part-time female workers had bigger
Correct article usage
a bigger
number
than full-timers, which were 22% (5200 people
) and 19% (4400 people
) respectively.
In 2012, there was a decline in the number
of male
who worked full-time, but it still took the biggest proportion of employment with 47%. Change to a plural noun
males
Similarly
, the percentage of women working part-time was also
decreased to 20%. A slight growth was seen in the number
of male part-timers with 7% of people
. Likewise
, women who had a full time
job increased in Add a hyphen
full-time
number
allocating for around a quarter.Submitted by ameliahanakaru01 on
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