The bar chart showed the percentage of school children learning to play four different musical instruments (violin, guitar, piano, drums) in 2005, 2010, 2015.
The given chart
illustrated
the shares of four separate musical instruments played by students at school from 2005 to 2015.
Wrong verb form
illustrates
Overall
, the figure for Guitar, Piano and Drum experienced an upward trend. By contrast
, the opposite trend was recorded for that of Violin. In addition
, the popularity of guitar
increased significantly throughout the period.
Regarding the rate of Guitar and Piano, the former rocketed and hit Correct article usage
the guitar
the
peak of roughly 27% in the final period and was still the lion’s share of musical instruments selected to Correct article usage
a
play
by school children. Wrong verb form
be played
Similarly
, the latter saw absolute
increase to precisely 25% which was 2.5 times larger than the level of 2005.
Add an article
an absolute
Furthermore
, in the initial five years, Drum and Violin stabilized at about 6% and 7.5%, respectively. Moreover
, whilst the number of students preferring playing Drum jumped and comprised around 8%, there was a reversal in the pattern observed for Violin compared to Drum, where the percentage was reduced slightly down to 7% in 2015.Submitted by ngocthuykatie on
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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