The charts give information about employment in the UK in 1998 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented pie charts compare data about the
number
and percentage of people from 4 various elements that worked in the UK at 2 different points of time namely, 1988 and 2012.
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Overall
, it was important that all parts other than Linking Words
Men
, who worked full-time, and women ,who worked part-time, had a rising trend; Use synonyms
moreover
, the Linking Words
number
of workers increased.
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According to
the Linking Words
men
's diagrams, males, who working full-time, both times had the main section; Use synonyms
additionally
, the portion of Linking Words
this
factor declined from 53% to 47% in 2012; Linking Words
in contrast
, at the start, it reached 12,539 after that, the figure of Linking Words
men
climbed to 13,794. Use synonyms
Men
, whose job was part-time, scored the minimum section and its proportion did not change visually owing to the fact that it scored 6% in 1988 and in 2012 it 1% grew; Use synonyms
furthermore
, the Linking Words
number
of workers Use synonyms
in
2012 roughly 700 jumped from 1,550 in 1988.
The women's graphs demonstrate that the full-time and part-time employees had approximately the same fraction in 1988; Change preposition
apply
thereafter
, part-time from 2% went down and reported 20% in 2012, but the Linking Words
number
of 700 increased; Use synonyms
nevertheless
, full-time 7% improved in 2012 from the prior time. Linking Words
In addition
, the figure of the population in 2012 recorded 7.696, which was nearly 2 times over than in 1988.Linking Words
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