The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the consumption wont of tea and coffee in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart for 4 weeks.
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