Some people say that in all levels of education from primary schools to universities too much time us spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree

It is true that,nowadays

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institutions usually allocate more time to study abstract theories than acquiring skulls.I am in favour

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argument since knowing facts often

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the results of

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and it is accessible to teach. The main reason why I agree with

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statement is that, most probably the highest marks are being scored for

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section.Having more abstract knowledge is likely to help to gain high bands in

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a vital role in choosing a career in the future.

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job opportunities are available to

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,most of the universities focus on delivering facts.

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,teaching theories

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skills seem to be more comfortable for teachers as it mostly happens inside the classrooms.To be more precise,field visits may lead

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situations which are unpreferred either by guides or learners.

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, students who study engineering might be exposed to the factory setup and

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may sometimes

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detrimental effects,

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kind of study.

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,practical skills might be learned

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working continuously

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that particular field,

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, there is no need to consider

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paramount of importance

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on

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school

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. In conclusion,I believe that

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most

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educational organisations do not

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amount of time

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studying practical skills

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the scoring

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ranking system on

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and lack of preference to get exposure

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real

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field.