The graph below gives information about the pnumber of estimated cars from 2020 to 2035. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares the hundreds number of cars manufactured in four specific different countries
of
the year 2020 and 2035.
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Overall
, as can be seen, Linking Words
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Japan Shows a significant trend in 2020.Correct word choice
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while
China hit the lowest point at the beginning. Linking Words
Moreover
, the UK and USA follow almost similar patterns during these years.
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It is clear that
in 2020 Japan was the dominant country in the production of the Cars 350, Linking Words
while
by 2035 it will drop Sharply to 100 which will beggest reduction . Linking Words
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2020
the production was at least 100 whit China , Add a comma
2020,
However
, it is supposed that it will increase steadily to 150 by 2035.
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On the other hand
, the UK and USA follow the same patterns with some differences. In 2020 the number of cars wasLinking Words
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high point between 200 and 300 thousand respectively. By 2035 it will probably be that they both will decrease sharply to zero .Change preposition
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