You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
This
Change the determiner
These
tables
depicts Fix the agreement mistake
table
Correct article usage
a multie
multie
of groups Correct your spelling
multiple
multi
about
Change preposition
of
ages
in New Zealand between 2011 and 2012 It is clear from the graph that all ages
4.381.269 to 4.410.284 had increase
gradually because Change the verb form
increased
develoment
Correct your spelling
development
human
Change preposition
of human
reproduciton
.
Correct your spelling
reproduction
According to
what is shown Firstly
, that
group Correct determiner usage
the
of
Change preposition
aged
ages
under 15 had increase
mildly Wrong verb form
increased
comparison
with the Change preposition
in comparison
ages
between 15 and 39 had decrease
very quickly. Wrong verb form
decreased
Secondly
, the groups age
from 40 to 64 Wrong verb form
aged
thier
Correct your spelling
their
per cent had
between 1.331.907 and 1.339.898 had Correct your spelling
percentage
increase
Change the verb form
increased
so
so swiftly because Rephrase
apply
thier
Correct your spelling
there
had
a lot of people same Verb problem
were
this
age
. Thirdly
, ages
who are above 65 Correct article usage
the ages
year
they had Change to a plural noun
years
increase
so quickly from 2011 to 2012 but Change the verb form
increased
Also
, thier
Correct your spelling
their
fuger
had little Change the capitalization
Fuger
cause
Correct word choice
because
this
age
is bager
and Correct your spelling
badger
thier
had most exposed to tried and diseases until they Correct your spelling
they
die
.
Wrong verb form
died
To sum up
, we could say that the group who age
are
under 15 it more Change the verb form
is
fuger
comparison with who Change the capitalization
Fuger
age
are
Change the verb form
is
pluse
65 Correct your spelling
plus
thier
per cent fuger it is so small.Correct your spelling
their
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ages, increase, age, thier with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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