The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010
The bar graph compares France and England's expenditure on five goods in 2010.
Overall
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British
people consumed more, with cars being the most popular goods. Use synonyms
However
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French'
expenditures were slightly higher in terms of computers and perfumes.
Cars were the most sought-after goods in 2010, with Correct your spelling
French
British
and French spending 450,000 and 400,000 on them respectively. Use synonyms
In contrast
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while
400,000 Linking Words
pounds
sterling was spent on books in England, French residents only spent 300,000 Use synonyms
pounds
on them. Use synonyms
This
disparity between the two nations becomes more apparent in terms of camera' expenditure, where the figure for France was half of England, at 150,000 Linking Words
pounds
sterling.
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Although
consumerism was more dominant among the Linking Words
British
in Use synonyms
this
specific year, the French spent more on computers and perfumes. In terms of computers, with a negligible difference, the French outspent Great Britain by over 350,000 Linking Words
pounds
of sterling being spent on Use synonyms
this
particular good. Linking Words
Moreover
, French citizens paid 200,00 Linking Words
pounds
, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
British
roughly spent 150,000 Use synonyms
pounds
on perfumes.Use synonyms
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