The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010

The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer 

goods in 2010
The bar graph compares France and England's expenditure on five goods in 2010.
Overall
,
British
people consumed more, with cars being the most popular goods.
However
, the
French'
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French
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expenditures were slightly higher in terms of computers and perfumes. Cars were the most sought-after goods in 2010, with
British
and French spending 450,000 and 400,000 on them respectively.
In contrast
,
while
400,000
pounds
sterling was spent on books in England, French residents only spent 300,000
pounds
on them.
This
disparity between the two nations becomes more apparent in terms of camera' expenditure, where the figure for France was half of England, at 150,000
pounds
sterling.
Although
consumerism was more dominant among the
British
in
this
specific year, the French spent more on computers and perfumes. In terms of computers, with a negligible difference, the French outspent Great Britain by over 350,000
pounds
of sterling being spent on
this
particular good.
Moreover
, French citizens paid 200,00
pounds
,
while
the
British
roughly spent 150,000
pounds
on perfumes.
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