The charts below show the percentage of people using public transport and that of people using private cars in five Australian cities between 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The line chart
provide
key information about present people using Change the verb form
provides
cars
and other transportation in a lot of places in Australia in
2000 to 2010.
The units are measured in Change preposition
from
persentages
.
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percentages
Overall
, it is clear form
the graph that private Correct your spelling
from
cars
are useing
more than public transport. Correct your spelling
used
In addition
, Sydney and Perth were both got same in all ten years, whereas
Sydney was usually up and dawn
.
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down
According to
what is shown, Adelaide got highest
percentage than Change the article
the highest
any thing
else it is about 90% of people using Correct your spelling
anything
there
own Replace the word
their
cars
.
In terms of Melbourne was taken
the lowest one in private Verb problem
apply
cars
it is
almost 20% in 2010.Wrong verb form
was
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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