The charts below show the percentage of people using public transport and that of people using private cars in five Australian cities between 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show the percentage of people using public transport and that of people using private cars in five Australian cities between 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line chart
provide
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key information about present people using
cars
and other transportation in a lot of places in Australia
in
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2000 to 2010. The units are measured in
persentages
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percentages
.
Overall
, it is clear
form
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from
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the graph that private
cars
are
useing
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used
more than public transport.
In addition
, Sydney and Perth were both got same in all ten years,
whereas
Sydney was usually up and
dawn
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down
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.
According to
what is shown, Adelaide got
highest
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percentage than
any thing
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anything
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else it is about 90% of people using
there
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their
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own
cars
. In terms of Melbourne was
taken
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the lowest one in private
cars
it
is
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almost 20% in 2010.
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