the graph below shows the number of tourist visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the total
number
of Use synonyms
tourist
visiting a Caribbean Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
islet
between 2010 and 2017. Looking from an Replace the word
island
overall
perspective, the total Linking Words
number
of tourists increased with occasional falls in Use synonyms
visitors
staying on Use synonyms
cruise
and on the Use synonyms
island
.
Between 2010 to 2011, the Use synonyms
number
of guests staying on the Use synonyms
cruise
ships rose to reach 0.5 Use synonyms
million
. Use synonyms
In contrast
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
staying on the Use synonyms
island
remained unchanged at approximately 0.55 Use synonyms
million
. In 2012, the trend of both categories differed, the Use synonyms
number
of people on Use synonyms
cruise
ships experienced a slight decline whilst the Use synonyms
number
of people on the Use synonyms
island
increased. By 2013, the Use synonyms
number
of people on Use synonyms
cruise
ships rose back to the same Use synonyms
number
of guests in 2011, and the numbers continued to rise steadily, reaching 2 Use synonyms
million
by 2017, 0.5 Use synonyms
million
higher than the Use synonyms
guest
staying on Fix the agreement mistake
number of guests
Use synonyms
island
. Add an article
the island
On the other hand
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
on the Use synonyms
island
remained unchanged at 1.5 Use synonyms
million
from 2013 to 2015. In 2016, they experienced a slight decline but increased to 1.5 Use synonyms
million
by 2017.
The total Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
tourist
experienced a steady incline throughout the years, with an exception in 2015 to 2016. In 2010, there were a total of 1 Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
million
Use synonyms
visitors
and it rose to approximately 2.55 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
visitors
by 2015. Between 2015 to 2016, the total Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
remained unchanged. By 2017, the Use synonyms
number
rose to 3.5 Use synonyms
million
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, cruise, island, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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