the graph below shows the number of tourist visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

the graph below shows the number of tourist visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the total
number
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of
tourist
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tourists
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visiting a Caribbean
islet
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island
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between 2010 and 2017. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, the total
number
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of tourists increased with occasional falls in
visitors
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staying on
cruise
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and on the
island
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. Between 2010 to 2011, the
number
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of guests staying on the
cruise
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ships rose to reach 0.5
million
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.
In contrast
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, the
number
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of
visitors
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staying on the
island
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remained unchanged at approximately 0.55
million
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. In 2012, the trend of both categories differed, the
number
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of people on
cruise
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ships experienced a slight decline whilst the
number
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of people on the
island
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increased. By 2013, the
number
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of people on
cruise
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ships rose back to the same
number
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of guests in 2011, and the numbers continued to rise steadily, reaching 2
million
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by 2017, 0.5
million
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higher than the
guest
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number of guests
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staying on
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island
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the island
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.
On the other hand
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, the
number
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of
visitors
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on the
island
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remained unchanged at 1.5
million
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from 2013 to 2015. In 2016, they experienced a slight decline but increased to 1.5
million
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by 2017. The total
number
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of
tourist
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tourists
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experienced a steady incline throughout the years, with an exception in 2015 to 2016. In 2010, there were a total of 1
million
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visitors
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and it rose to approximately 2.55
million
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visitors
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by 2015. Between 2015 to 2016, the total
number
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of
visitors
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remained unchanged. By 2017, the
number
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rose to 3.5
million
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, cruise, island, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 11 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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