the graph below shows the number of tourist visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the total
number
of tourist
visiting a Caribbean Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
islet
between 2010 and 2017. Looking from an Replace the word
island
overall
perspective, the total number
of tourists increased with occasional falls in visitors
staying on cruise
and on the island
.
Between 2010 to 2011, the number
of guests staying on the cruise
ships rose to reach 0.5 million
. In contrast
, the number
of visitors
staying on the island
remained unchanged at approximately 0.55 million
. In 2012, the trend of both categories differed, the number
of people on cruise
ships experienced a slight decline whilst the number
of people on the island
increased. By 2013, the number
of people on cruise
ships rose back to the same number
of guests in 2011, and the numbers continued to rise steadily, reaching 2 million
by 2017, 0.5 million
higher than the guest
staying on Fix the agreement mistake
number of guests
island
. Add an article
the island
On the other hand
, the number
of visitors
on the island
remained unchanged at 1.5 million
from 2013 to 2015. In 2016, they experienced a slight decline but increased to 1.5 million
by 2017.
The total number
of tourist
experienced a steady incline throughout the years, with an exception in 2015 to 2016. In 2010, there were a total of 1 Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
million
visitors
and it rose to approximately 2.55 million
visitors
by 2015. Between 2015 to 2016, the total number
of visitors
remained unchanged. By 2017, the number
rose to 3.5 million
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