the graph below shows the number of tourist visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

the graph below shows the number of tourist visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the total
number
of
tourist
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tourists
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visiting a Caribbean
islet
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island
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between 2010 and 2017. Looking from an
overall
perspective, the total
number
of tourists increased with occasional falls in
visitors
staying on
cruise
and on the
island
. Between 2010 to 2011, the
number
of guests staying on the
cruise
ships rose to reach 0.5
million
.
In contrast
, the
number
of
visitors
staying on the
island
remained unchanged at approximately 0.55
million
. In 2012, the trend of both categories differed, the
number
of people on
cruise
ships experienced a slight decline whilst the
number
of people on the
island
increased. By 2013, the
number
of people on
cruise
ships rose back to the same
number
of guests in 2011, and the numbers continued to rise steadily, reaching 2
million
by 2017, 0.5
million
higher than the
guest
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number of guests
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staying on
island
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the island
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.
On the other hand
, the
number
of
visitors
on the
island
remained unchanged at 1.5
million
from 2013 to 2015. In 2016, they experienced a slight decline but increased to 1.5
million
by 2017. The total
number
of
tourist
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experienced a steady incline throughout the years, with an exception in 2015 to 2016. In 2010, there were a total of 1
million
visitors
and it rose to approximately 2.55
million
visitors
by 2015. Between 2015 to 2016, the total
number
of
visitors
remained unchanged. By 2017, the
number
rose to 3.5
million
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, cruise, island, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 11 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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