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The charts below give information about electricity generation in two countries in 2009

The charts below give information about electricity generation in two countries in 2009
#information #electricity #generation #two #countries
The diagrams depict the amount of electricity generated in 2009 in
Germany
 and
France
 for all types of
energy
 and
the
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renewables
 specifically.
Germany
’s power supply is dominated by conventional thermal
energy
,
while
 nuclear
energy
 is highly used in
France
. In
the
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terms of
renewables
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 usage,
Germany
 mostly
utilize
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 biomass and wind;
however
,
hydroelectric
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 source is widely used in
France
. Electricity generation in
Germany
also
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 higher than in
France
, 560 and 510 billion kWh, respectively.
Firstly
, looking at
energy
 sources
at
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whole
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 in 2009, conventional thermal
energy
 was used significantly in
Germany
, which was around 60%, followed by nuclear and
renewables
 accounting for 23% and 17.4% respectively.
On the other hand
,
France
 extremely dominated its source of national electricity supply by nuclear
energy
, reaching
to
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76%.
Additionally
, renewable
energy
 utilization in
this
 country was about 13%, and thermal
energy
 was around 10%. Looking specifically
of
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the
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renewable
energy
 usage,
Germany
 mostly supplied
for
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renewables
 from biomass and wind-based
energy
.
Conversely
,
France
’s national renewable
energy
 source was led by hydroelectric supply (80.5%).
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words germany, france, energy, renewables with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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