Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to only be meant for adults. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. What are its causes, and what solutions can be offered?

Nowadays, it is a normal

occurence

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occurrence

to see

children

with

adult's

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types of illness. The most common disease suffered by

children

is

obesity

.

This

essay explains the causes of

this

alarming phenomenon and the solutions to prevent the number from increasing.

Variety

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of sugary drinks found in the market are catching the attention of many young

children

which often

lead

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leads

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to excessive drinking

habit

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habits

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. Consuming unhealthy beverages frequently

increase

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increases

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the risk of diabetes. On top of that, the

parents

' lack of attention to their

children

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children's

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food

and drink consumption is the main reason

of

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this

issue. The inability to control

food

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the food

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and drink intake of the child,

such

as frequently feeding them fast

food

and letting them drink sugary beverages, for a considerable amount of

time

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will immediately result in health complications.

For example

,

obesity

is one of the biggest health concerns in the US since many people, including

parents

, are often careless about the danger that unhealthy foods might have.

As a result

, the number of people who become obese

is

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has

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growing

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grown

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over the years. The solution

of

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this

concern can be done by the

parents

with the help of the government.

Firstly

,

parents

need to

have

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awareness

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aware

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of

maximum

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the maximum

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sugar and calorie daily intake of

children

and pay full attention to what their

childer

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children

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are consuming.

In addition

, the

goverment

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government

can help with the regulations that can be applied to restaurants and

school

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schools

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. For

the

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restaurants, they need to put

the

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information

of

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the calories for each meal to prevent overconsumption and for

school

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schools

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to promote healthy eating habits for the students and encourage them to

execise

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exercise

to stay fit.

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, the cafes in South Korea are stating the calories of each

drinks

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drink

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and

snacks

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to raise

awareness

of

obesity

.

Therefore

, the combination of individual

awareness

and government regulation might be helpful to reduce the risk of

obesity

. In conclusion, the main reason

of

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obesity

comes from the

parents

who

failed

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to control

children's

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their children's

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food

intake and the best solution to offer is to raise individual

awareness

regarding overconsumption and

to

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for

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the

goverment

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government

to make health-related regulations.