The two maps below show an olympic and paraolympic village in 2000 and the same village today Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant

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The two maps picture above compare the Olympics and Paralympics in 2000 and the same town today.

Overall

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it is clear that

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the town has evolved a lot in recent years. There are new facilities have been added.

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, to a new highway in the middle of the village. Looking at the information in more detail, obviously, the Olympic Village

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has had

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a huge

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development in past years. There

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new buildings that can serve the city's citizens. Looking at the maps on the north side we can see there is a new car park space. Next to it, we can notice that the fitness centre has been extended.

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, there is a new village square beside the welcome centre.

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. There is a new route in the middle of the town to connect all the places together.

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, There are two new hospital buildings on the south side across the road. In the east corner in 2000 there used to be a car park.

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. It become a multi-faith centre. And the car parking replaced to the opposite corner.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

179 words

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The two maps below show an olympic and paraolympic village in 2000 and the same village today Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant

Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that it is important to spend a lot of money on family celebrations. While others think it is a waste of money. Discuss both views. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication such as emails, text massages or telephone calls. Give your opinion and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Every year government and individuals spent money on New Year and religious celebration (Agree or disagree).