The two maps below show an olympic and paraolympic village in 2000 and the same village today Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant

The two maps below show an olympic and paraolympic village in 2000 and the same village today Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant
The two maps picture above compare the Olympics and Paralympics in 2000 and the same town today.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the town has evolved a lot in recent years. There are new facilities have been added.
In addition
, to a new highway in the middle of the village. Looking at the information in more detail, obviously, the Olympic Village
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has had
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a huge
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development in past years. There
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new buildings that can serve the city's citizens. Looking at the maps on the north side we can see there is a new car park space. Next to it, we can notice that the fitness centre has been extended.
Also
, there is a new village square beside the welcome centre.
Moreover
. There is a new route in the middle of the town to connect all the places together.
Also
, There are two new hospital buildings on the south side across the road. In the east corner in 2000 there used to be a car park.
However
. It become a multi-faith centre. And the car parking replaced to the opposite corner.
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