The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
The given line graph shows
the
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information about the quantities of goods transported in the UK, broken down into four different modes of transport:
road
, water, rail, and
pipeline
, between 1974 and 2002.
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that
number
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of goods distributed on
road
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were
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the largest,
whereas
that of with
pipeline
were
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the smallest among all means throughout the
givern
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given
time frame. In 1974, a closer look at the line graph report that
at
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about 70
million
tonnes
of products were delivered by
road
which was the largest
quanitities
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quantities
of all other modes of transport, followed by water and rail at the dame figures
at
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40
million
tonnes
, and
pipeline
at less than 10%, respectively. From 19750 to
early
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1980s, it can
be notice
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that
while
Road
and rail underwent a slight drop, the other two experienced
a
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growing figures. Around 1982 onwards, goods
that
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transport
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on
road
rose at
constant
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rate before
reached
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its
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peak at about 95
million
tonnes
in 2002, that of those shipped by water
were gradually rise
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gradually rose
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to above 60
million
tonnes
. Surprisingly, the quantities of products distributed by
rails
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rail
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experienced some fluctuation of less than 40
million
tonnes
before remained stable with the same figures at 40
million
tonnes
,
whereas
pipeline
reached its
peaked
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at above 20
millions
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million
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tonnes
and remained stable till the end.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 91%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road, pipeline, million, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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