The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
The given line graph shows
the
information about the quantities of goods transported in the UK, broken down into four different modes of transport: Correct article usage
apply
road
, water, rail, and pipeline
, between 1974 and 2002.
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that number
of goods distributed on Change the article
a number
the number
road
Correct article usage
the road
were
the largest, Correct subject-verb agreement
was
whereas
that of with pipeline
were
the smallest among all means throughout the Change the verb form
was
givern
time frame.
In 1974, a closer look at the line graph report that Correct your spelling
given
at
about 70 Change preposition
apply
million
tonnes
of products were delivered by road
which was the largest quanitities
of all other modes of transport, followed by water and rail at the dame figures Correct your spelling
quantities
at
40 Change preposition
of
million
tonnes
, and pipeline
at less than 10%, respectively. From 19750 to early
1980s, it can Correct article usage
the early
be notice
that Change the verb form
be noticed
while
Road
and rail underwent a slight drop, the other two experienced a
growing figures.
Around 1982 onwards, goods Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
transport
on Wrong verb form
transported
road
rose at constant
rate before Correct article usage
a constant
reached
Wrong verb form
reaching
its
peak at about 95 Correct pronoun usage
their
million
tonnes
in 2002, that of those shipped by water were gradually rise
to above 60 Change the verb form
gradually rose
million
tonnes
. Surprisingly, the quantities of products distributed by rails
experienced some fluctuation of less than 40 Fix the agreement mistake
rail
million
tonnes
before remained stable with the same figures at 40 million
tonnes
, whereas
pipeline
reached its peaked
at above 20 Replace the word
peak
millions
Change to singular
million
tonnes
and remained stable till the end.Submitted by kamonluck1999 on
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